Small tweaks

In working on the third draft for our Trailer to the film Subject 984 it was suggested to us that, though the linear aspect of the trailer had gone and the tension racks up at a more impressive rate at the end of the film, there were still a couple of tweaks that needed to be made.
The first of those changes that needed to be made was that Silvia Brown's dialogue (which is played as the backdrop to what is going on for the first portion of the trailer) needed to be re-recorded because the audio sounded second rate (it felt as though her voice was echoing). In order to fix that we were going to need to record the dialogue again in a more controlled environment with better equipment.
The other concern was that we needed to have a few more 'little moments' and 'break up clips' that separated the pivotal moments at the end of the trailer. This could be bigger hints at what the Trory Anwir Institution for Mental Health was getting up to or greater hints that Mya Brown and Christopher feel the need to try and escape. This meant that we needed to go to the drawing board and put together a couple of ideas for other things that could potentially be added in order to make sure that our trailer was the best that it could be.